Well done. The song fits so well, and you've done great with timing pieces of video to the song.
Some of the non-verbal parts seem to slow down - one part that stuck out in that way was when there was 2:08 to go and it was Scourge on one side and... some other guy on the other. It was quite prolonged. Perhaps interspersing that with random fight sequences between Scourge and other guy to spice it up?
Scourge really fits this song. Not that he needed any more proof of hardassedness. Despite the length of the song (which you didn't shorten! yay!) and the repetitiveness of the lyrics, you've come up with a lot of things to put in the video. And this is your first attempt! Woo.
Well done. The song fits so well, and you've done great with timing pieces of video to the song.
Thank you!
Some of the non-verbal parts seem to slow down - one part that stuck out in that way was when there was 2:08 to go and it was Scourge on one side and... some other guy on the other. It was quite prolonged. Perhaps interspersing that with random fight sequences between Scourge and other guy to spice it up?
This would be a part wherein RiD being semi-unloved comes back to bite me. The staring scene comes from Scourge trying to convince Ultra Magnus to help him kill Prime - abolish God, if you will. In short, it make perfect sense if you've seen the episode and is otherwise boring.
Scourge really fits this song. Not that he needed any more proof of hardassedness.
Does the song prove Scourge to be hardass or does Scourge prove the song to be hardass? A koan for the ages.
Despite the length of the song (which you didn't shorten! yay!) and the repetitiveness of the lyrics, you've come up with a lot of things to put in the video. And this is your first attempt! Woo.
I managed to find enough stuff, so I went with it.
:D While I can't provide feedback as deep as Scott's, I do say that wow. I really enjoyed this. Never was a big Scourge fan before, but, I think this song proved to me that Scourge is quite hardass ;D
*Curls around RiD with a happy smile and now a Scourge plushy*
I don't know anything about RiD except what I've picked up from Deadzone, but that's a well-done video! A kick-ass song, and the video certainly suggests that Scourge is a kick-ass character.
Scourge most assuredly is a kick-ass character. He was my favourite character out of RiD and the main reason that I watched it at all. Scourge really shined because he wasn't just powerful, he was intelligent, resourceful, and knew how to lead a team.
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Date: 2007-10-04 11:25 pm (UTC)Some of the non-verbal parts seem to slow down - one part that stuck out in that way was when there was 2:08 to go and it was Scourge on one side and... some other guy on the other. It was quite prolonged. Perhaps interspersing that with random fight sequences between Scourge and other guy to spice it up?
Scourge really fits this song. Not that he needed any more proof of hardassedness. Despite the length of the song (which you didn't shorten! yay!) and the repetitiveness of the lyrics, you've come up with a lot of things to put in the video. And this is your first attempt! Woo.
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Date: 2007-10-04 11:51 pm (UTC)Thank you!
Some of the non-verbal parts seem to slow down - one part that stuck out in that way was when there was 2:08 to go and it was Scourge on one side and... some other guy on the other. It was quite prolonged. Perhaps interspersing that with random fight sequences between Scourge and other guy to spice it up?
This would be a part wherein RiD being semi-unloved comes back to bite me. The staring scene comes from Scourge trying to convince Ultra Magnus to help him kill Prime - abolish God, if you will. In short, it make perfect sense if you've seen the episode and is otherwise boring.
Scourge really fits this song. Not that he needed any more proof of hardassedness.
Does the song prove Scourge to be hardass or does Scourge prove the song to be hardass? A koan for the ages.
Despite the length of the song (which you didn't shorten! yay!) and the repetitiveness of the lyrics, you've come up with a lot of things to put in the video. And this is your first attempt! Woo.
I managed to find enough stuff, so I went with it.
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Date: 2007-10-05 02:24 am (UTC)*Curls around RiD with a happy smile and now a Scourge plushy*
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Date: 2007-10-05 04:59 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-10-05 04:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-10-05 04:57 am (UTC)Scourge most assuredly is a kick-ass character. He was my favourite character out of RiD and the main reason that I watched it at all. Scourge really shined because he wasn't just powerful, he was intelligent, resourceful, and knew how to lead a team.
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Date: 2007-10-06 05:08 am (UTC):D I can only squee.
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Date: 2007-10-06 07:55 pm (UTC)